Glad there was a recording of this. It was a fun panel, even though I live
too far away to attend. I'm going through Yang's stuff right now. These are
pretty funny!
At any rate, grats on your panel!
I'm really impressed by all of this, but it seems a bit rushed in places.
For instance, 'Ironically, the fuel supply is next to the lake'. It
probably would've been better to say that the fuel generators are next to
the lake in order to make it easier to transport water to them to cool
them. Would you like a beta reader? Someone to go over it after you've
written it, and fix spelling/grammar/continuity errors? Because I'd like to
help in any way I can, and spritework is a bit beyond me..
I said Ironically because to me it is dumb to place generators nearby the
lake when it is vulnerable enough for water to pass through when it's blown
up. I should rarely explain purpose of such events as I want kids who watch
this without being bothered much by scientific explanation. Right now, I'm
shaping all my skills to produce a good fanfic. It's a good experience for
me. Thanks for the offer anyway.:)
In desperate times like an invasion, you sometimes forget to realize you
were hurt badly. from Pt 7 Katara was able to close his wounds before they
went to ba sing se, and It is more easier to grab and climb up a ledge from
the roof, than to grab and climb up Appa.
nice bro... you really must like avatar ;x i wanted that they made this new
book and not the movie... the movie probaly sux they will lose money on
that... anyway you did whatt they didnt...
MLP FanFiction Reading Who We Are by Kits requested by lepetit roquet
This is the entirety of the story Who We Are, but kits. I have split the reading into 5 parts, and my commentary on the fic can be viewed on the 5th part. If anyone ...
oh you released a long version with all chapters and without your feedback
^^ the feedback from you was really nice. and your readings are nice too ^^
and this story was just awesome. i'm not sure, who is the changeling. but i
guess that is have to be fluttershy or pinkie. pinkie pie because of her
talk with rainbow dash. that she dont hate the changeling no matter what.
and flutters because her talk with twilight after the sleepover. really
hard to tell.
+Akash Thereader you're welcome ^^ neigher do I can't wait for more ^^ and you commentaries aren´t pointless XD they sounded more emotional. i like that ^^ keep going and do your thing ;)
Thank you so much! I'm glad to hear that at least a couple of people actually enjoy my pointless ramblings and monologues. Thank you for enjoying the reading, I can't wait until I have a chance to get more out
awesome, I always really enjoy these fanfic, some people stop making fanfic readings or pony related stuff saying that the fandom is drawing to a close or whatever, I think that's complete bollocks~ it's never been more fun for me.
Really glad you liked it :DI also submitted this reading to EqD, so hopefully I can reach as many people as I can with this story; it's probably my favorite reading so far.
Fanfiction Readings:Heart of Fire-You'll be in my Heart Ch 2 Healing
Well here's chapter two, I hope you like it. Also a short question should I keep the pitch change for the characters or do you not mind it. Song is lazy afternoon ...
For some reason the video cut out half way through me opening it. So this is as far as I got unfortunately. Doesn't change the fact I am so unbeilevably happy ...
The Thirteenth Key AFF Trailer
A trailer for my fanfic: The Thirteenth Key I do not own any of the song or videos used. I have not yet started this fanfic, I will when the time comes.